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So... we have our first bit of magic. Which no one even really notices, barring our little boy Finnar. :)

And there is news this week: Webcomics Panel Thursday, March 29.

4 comments on this post.
  1. wr4ith0:

    Fell magicks!

  2. mleiv:

    And lots more to come! :)

  3. Rebecca Turner:

    Hey,
    just found your webcomic and it looks like it will be really interesting! I see you live in seattle! I live just a bit north of you in Stanwood. I have lived in a lot of town s between seattle and here in my life though. I was born in seattle and have lived there in the past, and I think its cool thats your local.
    Hey one thing I don't get (and I read a lot of webcomics! I love them and some comic books like pearls before swine, and stuff like that..I collect the books for my favorites, and when I discovered web comics I was so happy and there are so many really good ones out there!)
    but I'm confused on how to read this. from left to right straight across? like a book, or the left bunch of panels down then go back up to the right bunch? Im going to wait for a reply before I read more because this one I was just kind of confused as to the events of what happens first then 2nd and so on. I also had this problem with the pages before this too, I think because your layout is a bit different than most.
    Love the art so far! and it looks to be a good story so far. Your influences are also some of my favorites! I was so mad when they took farscape off tv! lol I loved that show!.
    R. T.

  4. mleiv:

    The narrative flow varies from page to page. Sometimes narration is horizontal, sometimes vertical, sometimes in circles. In its intended format, print, this doesn't seem to cause many issues in reading. But online reading of course changes things, particularly with the limited size and lack of page divide.

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